Screen Shots

Teaser Trailer

FInal Cut Feedback

Positives;
- The use of flashback at the beginning gives us a feeling of what the film is going to be like, good editing.
- Editing on the pictures was good and the sound went well with it when the pictures were flicking through.
- Production company's logo is very impressive.
-The repetition of the images+ the increase pace really builds up suspense makes us empathise with protagonist.
- Sound and clips work perfectly together to maintain a tense atmosphere
- Spotlight bit is really good and really liked the use of sound. The special effects used in some of the flashbacks are very good, the sound with the photos at the end is also very good.
- Liked the production company and the sound over it.
- Like the editing between the kidnapped person and the park.
- Lovely memory photos.
- Film production logo animation looks really good.
- Liked the lighting at the beginning with the light moving around the frame.
- The lighting of the hostage room was really creative and works well.
- The sound in time with the images builds up suspense well.
-Really liked the first shot with the production logo, it was really effective and cleverly done.
- The photos that were used near the end started piling up at the end and this was really effective.
- Like the blurry effects to create a sense of flashbacks, the use of photographs really built up emotion.
-Liked the shots to show the relationship between the characters when they are playing football.
- Liked the pictures flash up and gradually get faster as they create tension.


Improvements;
- The ending could be improved.
- It could have a stronger ending as it doesn't really explain why he has been taken.
- The titles at the beginning could stay up longer.
- While the two characters are playing football the camerawork is jerky.
- The swinging of the lamp could be smoother.
- Lighting in the end clips flick from light to dark, this isn't very noticeable but a little distracting.
- Potentially too dark in the captivity section.
- The pictures at the end go on for a little too long and the pauses on the photos are longer on some then others.
-The titles at the end make it look like a trailer.
- Titles were quite small, possibly make them slightly bigger.
- Use a mixture of effects instead of the thunder.
- Have titles and names up on screen for longer right at the beginning.

Window Pane

Shot one shows our company logo spotlight productions, we chose this one because we liked the idea of the moving logo and we think this one represented this idea well.

Shot two shows the lighting of our thriller, within the captive seen there is very low lighting to create a mysterious effect. It also gives a view of the lighting that is used throughout our thriller. It is very low lighting apart from when there is flashback shown when it suddenly changes to natural, bright lighting to show the contrast between the two sets of shots.

Shot three shows a close up of the weapon in the hands of the enemy this is a very significant prop to our opening sequence as it is used in one of the most important events in our sequence - the killing.

Shot four shows the costume worn by the hostage, a torn, muddy, blood covered shirt, ripped trousers and a hessian sack covering his face this was a strong mise en scene point for our thriller.

Shot five shows an example of camerawork that is used commonly throughout our sequence to signify certain props and aspects of mise en scene. In this case, it is the football which is important to the scene as it brings back happy memories.

Shot six shows piece of camera work we used which was a hand held camera looking at the victim in the bushes this showed that the audience were looking through the point of view of the killer.


Shot seven shows a long shot of the couple playing football, this also reflects the thriller convention of the extraordinary happening in the ordinary world. For example, the extraordinary is a normal scene in this case of a couple playing football compared with the ordinary event of a shot of the captive. 


Shot eight shows a close up of the gun against the face of the victim this also shows the media convention of Voyeurism because the gun is placed against a woman's head. This is often used to show women as commodities to be had. 


Shot nine shows the hostage on his side it shows that he gets emotional when placed in a situation where he is forced to think about his one main weakness, his 'achilles heel'. 

Final thriller

This is our final cut thriller.

thriller rough cut

Preparing for Filming

Meeting at 11:00 at Mepal primary school.


Dom is bringing:

• Chair
• Full suit 
• Pillow

Tom is bringing:

• Light
• Gun
• Hessen sack
• White shirt
• Jeans
• Worn white shirt
• Casual clothing (for three different scenes)
• Pillow

Jess is bringing:

• Light
• Casual clothing (for three different scenes)
• Pillow
• Camera / Tripod

Amy is bringing:

• Lucozade bottle 
• Pillow

call sheet

Call sheet u1 29

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Titles

We've decided within our title sequence we want to include the company name:
'Spotlight Studios' with the appropriate company logo also.

We also want to include the actors real names as appose to the character names to make it seem more professional as this is a common feature shown in existing film productions.
'Dominic Jones' 'Tom Harradine' 'Jessica Howard'
And the directors name too:
'Amy Smith'.

We've decided on a font also (seen in our previous posts) which is from dafont.com and called pulse.
we thought this is a good font as it is distorted and appears to be a short life line which makes it seem like the reflection of our story line.

Pulp fiction opening titles, (Tom)

I chose the thriller: Pulp fiction

The opening to Pulp fiction is different to others, it isn't really shots of the movie and people in it, it starts with two people in a diner and one shouts this is a robbery, then the music starts to play and the credits appear. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9UcnT3sMcfw&feature=fvw

Firstly the music used in the piece is a known song called 'Pump it' by black eyed peas but the orginal in the opening is called 'Misirou' written by Dick Dale. The sound is non-diegetic because its not actuall happening or fitting in, the music is quite upbeat and lively, this then gives out a relaxed enviroment which is different from other thrillers because others use the tempo in music to increase tension.

The editing in the opening is very unique and complex, the beggining of the opening tittles there is a bullet and it goes through different ojects whilst slowly making progress across the screen.




Unfinished

Lesson 17/2/11

This is our first go at playing around with title effects in final cut within our title sequence, we used effects such as earthquake and blur to create a distorted effect :)

Lesson 15/2/11

In today's lesson we have finalised some ideas which were still in the air, we decided on the location for our thriller opening such as we chose to film the majority of our opening in soham, such as the snooker hall and park, Dom is going to ask permission for filming in the snooker hall soon. For our dark room we are going to ask permission from Mepal's primary school to borrow a classroom for this. We also decided on the date to film our project. 


We also made our flashback sequence in final cut today:





This way we'll have a head start on our editing as we our filming on the last weekend possible not giving us much time for editing ):

Font Ideas

We liked this font because of the heart pulse through the middle of the writing. We are considering this font for our main title.



We liked this one too as it is distorted and looks scratched and worn.


We're not too keen on this font, it seems quite mysterious to the audience.


We all really liked this font as it fits the distorted mise en scene we were looking to create.


We liked this font but it seems more suitable for a horror and also it is quite difficult to read.


This is a clearer font to read than the above but with a very similar style to it, but we don't like these as much as we do some of our other options.

Our Test Shot Footage

This is our test footage for one of our shots for our thriller. You can see the safety precautions we took during this :)

Safety precautions for our thriller opening

We realised that if we were going to film our captive falling from a chair then we would have to protect his head. We did this by covering his head with various items of clothing and also used a sports mat for the captive to land on so he didn't hurt himself. These pictures also show that we want to tie the captives hands for a full effect. 

More Happy Memory Images

Our sonic mood board

This is our final sonic moodboard it shows the type of mise en scene we plan to create during our thriller. We also used the images we plan to use in our "happy memories" flash backs of the captive and his girlfriend. We used the sound effects of pool balls smashing to show the dramatic swing of the captives head as he tries to fight off the flash backs he is having.

Story Board

Camera Shot List

Our Happy Memory Photos

These are some of the still images we are going to use in our flash back sequence to represent the memories of the captive's past life.